Pitch investors at the right level of abstraction

I’ve just read the a truly excellent guide to fundraising from First Round Capital. It’s a long read, but packed full of goodness and I highly recommend reading the whole article.

I’m going to pick out and expand on one point – it’s critical that founders pitch investors at the right level of abstraction. The two common mistakes are:

  • Pitching too much in the weeds, leaving investors unexcited about the big picture
  • Pitching at too high a level, preventing investors from really feeling the opportunity – you’re looking to create a visceral connection

As First Round put it:

The fundraising founder has to operate at the right oxygen level between the soil and the stratosphere. Not in the trenches, but not in rarified air.

Founders who are pitching too much in the weeds focus too much on operations, short term progress, and the mechanics of the business. If investors are worried about market size or exit potential, or if they are simply looking bored, you may be making this mistake.

Conversely, founders who are pitching at too high a level talk too much about market trends (often using poorly defined buzzwords) and don’t properly connect their story with their business. If investors are asking lots of questions about what you actually do or struggle to understand your story, then think about whether you are making this mistake.

The best pitches paint a picture of the future which is easy to understand and grounded in reality. Then they describe the path that will get them there, starting from where they are today.